[Loraine]

Thanks @DiscostewLA ! I appreciate the nice critique on the rhythm and vocals. I’ve struggled with both, but they’re getting better.

I do have to say that I find humor in this being a song sung at summer camp. Seems like an odd topic to introduce at a camp for kids that were sent there by parents who may or may not have had time. No inference on your parents or their reasons. My brothers and I went to summer camp too in the Poconos every year. It’s just my warped sense of humor talking here.